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Composed by Karen Cole-Peralta

For Neways International Co.

 

 

 

 

 

  

WE'RE NOT A GIMMICKY SALES TRIP ! ! !  

 

LISTEN:   STOP  POLLUTING

YOUR  BLOOD   WITH

   ENGINE DEGREASERS ! ! !    

        

 

 

 

            We're NOT being silly!  You are actually doing so!  That’s SLS (sodium lauryl sulfate) they are using in 90% of the shampoos commonly marketed today.  That’s right; it’s been poisoning your scalp and entire body for years.  It’s commonly used as an anionic surfactant in car wash soaps, garage floor cleaners, and engine degreasers.  Do you want to be crazy?  Do you need poisonous chemicals going into your head? 

Well, neither do we!  We are Neways!  We care about all of you, as mothers, fathers, friends or anyone at all, and most especially we care about your children! 

 

Engine degreasers cure nothing that ails you, you know…

When scientists sampled Andrea Martin’s blood and urine to see what toxins she’d picked up from the world around her, she got a surprise.  ‘I had 95 poisonous chemical contaminants in my small body.  And it was mind-blowing!’ said Martin. 

The test results clearly indicated the average person picks up significant amounts of an astounding number of chemicals that are known to be dangerous in larger doses.

        MARTIN AND EIGHT OTHERS were tested by the Mt. Sinai School of Medicine in New York and an advocacy organization called the Environmental Working Group.  On average, the nine participants had traces of 53 chemicals known to cause cancer in human or animal tests.  In addition, they had an average of 62 chemicals toxic to the brain or nervous system, plus 55 associated with birth defects.

        The scientists did not find any single substance in amounts the government describes as unhealthy, but said the sheer number of chemicals was unnerving, especially given the uncertainty about the health effects of trace amounts…”

--Robert Hager, respected NBC-TV journalist, reporting on one very important story, affecting the health of your family!

 

 

HERE’S WHAT YOU CAN DO ABOUT THIS SAD BUT CORRECTIBLE SITUATION: NEWAYS!  TRY US AND SEE, FOR YOU WILL NOT BE SORRY AT ALL!  YOU WILL NOT BE POISONING YOURSELF ANYMORE, AND YOU WILL LIVE MUCH LONGER IF YOU ONLY TAKE BETTER CARE OF YOURSELF!

 

   AND SO HERE WE GO WITH A

   BRIEF HISTORY OF NEWAYS :

 

The Neways Story:  About six months ago, I was made aware of some disturbing information regarding the personal care products we use every day.  Once this information was revealed to me, I became a distributor for Neways International, a natural personal care products manufacturing company located in Utah, with distributors in over 50 countries.  Neways is a professional and conscientious corporation, which with the Globous Relief Fund works together to form the Empower Alliance, a world-wide charitable organization.

The company has been in business for over 16 years, and Neways is family-owned and operated by the Mowers.  Tom Mower has a degree in chemical engineering, and used to sell industrial chemical products, such as engine degreaser and hydraulic fluid.  One fine day, however, a cosmetic company came to visit his place of employment and requested a chemical called propylene glycol.  Propylene glycol is a hazardous chemical found in engine degreaser and hydraulic fluid.

It is also a common ingredient found in cosmetics.

Mower was amazed to hear this harmful chemical is used in numerous products that consumers use, every single day!  These chemicals were “grandfathered in” by uncaring chemical manufacturers who only want to turn a buck!  Therefore, they have never been properly tested to determine their potential long-term affects upon the human body!

 

THAT’S RIGHT!

 CHEMICALS

YOUR CHILDREN ARE STUCK GROWING UP WITH FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES,

DESTROYING THEM -

 Unless you DO SOMETHING ! ! !

 

 

 

YOU TOO HAVE BEEN HORRIBLY SUFFERING FROM THESE POISONOUS CHEMICALS FOR YEARS -

PROBABLY - FOR YOUR ENTIRE LIFE!!!

 

 

THE STRAIGHTFORWARD FACTS

ABOUT PERSONAL CARE:

 

    Please, let me explain to you about dangerous household products.  The products I am talking about include toothpaste, mouthwash, deodorant, shampoo, conditioner, skin lotion, body wash, shaving cream, bubble bath, baby wipes, cosmetics and more…the list is long, but not endless.

     The chemicals in the products you are currently using have the potential to gradually poison your body and increase your risk exposure to cancer.  You and your family members use these products every day without a second thought.  But think about it.  How do you feel, lately?

    Ingredients like DEA (diethanolamine), TEA (trethanolamine), propylene glycol, SLS (sodium lauryl sulfate, mentioned above), fluoride, and alcohol, have all been identified by experts as known or potential carcinogens.  Of course, that’s just the start of what they are finishing off in you.  Poison, such as the nicotine in cigarettes, is a proven cause of early deaths due to lung cancer.  Yes, tobacco is natural, but why would you inhale a concentrated plant?  You have to be very careful about what you put in your body, or you will find out that you weren’t careful enough, you see.  It catches up with everybody! 

 

But don’t think you can’t do anything!

 

Neways is careful.  We do not carelessly throw “cleaners” into our products, without carefully lab-testing them first to see how they tick.  YOU CAN TRUST US!  We sell no such “junky” products.  We sell NATURAL products, and unlike tobacco, they can all be trusted to NOT poison your family’s bodies and your minds!  They will clean you, and leave you refreshed, feeling clean and healthy!

And think of your children.  They are growing people.  They NEED something better than what they are getting.  Think of the time you washed once, and the soap went into your eyes.  You know exactly how that felt!

Well, be prepared for a shocker.  “Normal” baby shampoos are all made from the same types of harmful chemicals we mentioned!  Even if it seems to not hurt your child’s eyes, it harms them subtly, without seeming so awful.  They HAVE harmful chemicals in them…the manufacturers just don’t tell you about that.  They use other chemicals to make the shampoo SEEM safer.  That doesn’t mean the poisonous chemicals aren’t there!

 

ABOUT SODIUM LAURYL SULFATE, WHICH YOU ARE NOW USING:

 

        SLS, more commonly known as Sodium Lauryl Sulfate, (a common foaming ingredient found in everything from shampoo, body wash, bubble bath and toothpaste) is the culprit in thousands of complaints to the FDA. According to Ruth Winters, author of “A Consumer’s Dictionary of Cosmetic Ingredients” the FDA has received reports from consumers that include reactions to SLS such as eye and scalp irritation, tangled hair, swelling of hands, face and arms, and split and fuzzy hair. But this isn’t the worst of it.

         SLS is a wetting agent, or surfactant, whose purpose is to reduce the surface tension of the water, thus allowing the shampoo to spread easier and penetrate more easily. It is a cheap ingredient and mixed with Sodium Stearate, it usually composes approximately fifty percent of a shampoo’s ingredients. About forty percent is water and the other 10 percent is preservatives, fragrance and color. Many shampoos that claim to have herbal extracts usually include them in the water content. However, with all the other chemicals, the risks far outweigh the benefit these herbs provide.  You need a larger amount of the natural herbs.

        Judi Vance, a pioneer in the fight to educate consumers about the chemicals contained in most personal care products and author of “Beauty to Die For” has done exhaustive research on SLS.

          Here are some of the results of her findings:

        There are four categories of SLS. They include Anionic, Nonionic, Cationic and Amphoteric. Amphoteric and Anionic are the types found in most shampoos, conditioners and lotions. Anionic are the cheapest and foam the best, while Amphoteric are the mildest group and are used in shampoos for their conditioning abilities. The Nonionic group is used in spray-on oven cleaners. But here is where the problem lies.

          A study citied in the Wall Street Journal (November 1, 1988) linked SLS to cataracts and nitrate absorption (nitrates are carcinogens-or cancer causing substances). Apparently, this absorption occurs when the SLS becomes contaminated with NDELA (N-nitrosodiethanolamine) during processing. This contamination comes about as a result of SLS coming into contact with chemicals such as TEA (triethanolamine), which is a commonly used ingredient in commercial shampoos as a detergent.

         The equation looks like this: SLS + TEA = NDELA (a nitrosamine and a recognized carcinogen).

          What bothers us is while many companies claim that SLS is a safe ingredient (the jury is still out on this) the problem is what we refer to as a “chemical cocktail”.  When these ingredients come into contact with one another, some will bond, forming cancer causing nitrosamines. This is where the danger lies.  So, while some chemicals may be mild or classified as safe independently, once you combine them, dangerous things can happen.  Just because SLS supposedly comes from coconuts doesn’t mean the molecular structure isn’t potentially damaging.

          There is a lot of information available on SLS - it is very controversial these days. The presence of the “chemical cocktail” is a very real and ticking time bomb. Read labels and choose alternatives. Many companies have developed products that foam just as or nearly as well as many large-scale commercial products (check out our organic herbal shampoo!) And just because a product claims to be natural (they can say the product is natural if it contains SLS since it’s derived from coconuts) doesn’t mean it’s safe. Read labels, research and ask questions. We’ll have more to come on this area in the future!

 

 

IT'S WHY YOU MUST TRY THE

NEWAYS APPROACH TO SKIN,

HAIR, BATH & GROOMING . . .

 . . . AND BEGIN TO BE WELL ! ! !

 

 

We sincerely hope this information is food for thought by your potentially chemically-laden brain!  Just think how much better you will feel, using a safe and laboratory-tested Neways product such as “Silken Mild Family Shampoo.”  It pampers your scalp and hair, treating it and your bloodstream gently and wisely, for a change, with all-natural ingredients that are clinically proven to be harmless and safe!

 And think how your beautiful children will be safer, blossoming and growing without added danger of cancer and other serious health risks--or lifelong permanent damage ! ! !

 

Your family will THANK YOU for using Neways!

 

 

       The Globous Relief Fund        

 

        And now, it's time to switch subjects for a moment and tell you about our affiliation with the wonderful Globous Relief Fund that serves charities for families and children all over the world!  By buying any Neways products at all, you are serving this both American and International group.

Read on, and I will tell you all about it!

The Globous Relief Fund is a completely legal and licensed charity serving businesses, other charities, and all kinds of needy populations in the USA and abroad.  We gather corporate surplus and other donations, process those materials, and distribute them to charities that need those resources to serve people struggling through war, natural disasters, and extreme poverty.

RELIEVING HUMAN SUFFERING IS NOT A COMPETITION, BUT INSTEAD INVOLVES COOPERATION BETWEEN CARING PEOPLE!

 Our mission is to provide the resources necessary to enhance human life.  We do this through establishing a more efficient system of giving, and Neways International, through the Empower Alliance, is one of our chief corporate partners, working closely with us in all our highly important endeavors.

           When my clients—potentially OUR clients, as I will explain to you further on in this letter—agree to buy one product packet per month, (which can vary from $50 to $150, or potentially less), every $1000 earned by you over time provides the Empower Alliance with $5,000 to $10,000 in direct aid for our humanitarian efforts all over the world.

           Our Relief Fund uses less than 8% of our profits for administrative purposes, and Neways clearly offers a superior line of beneficial products that people both want and NEED.  Neways is an established corporation that has been in business for over sixteen years, and we are totally debt-free.  We are honest, straightforward, and charitable.  Why not try our products out?  You may end up selling them!  For although I want you to order products through my website (the address of which can be found at the end of this letter) you may want to go ahead and become a Neways affiliate as well ! ! !

 

 

 

WE CAN ALWAYS USE YOUR HELP!  YOU CAN BE LOVED, WANTED AND NEEDED BY THOUSANDS OF CHILDREN ALL OVER THE CIVILIZED WORLD!

COME SUPPORT US, AND WE WILL SUPPORT YOU BACK ! ! !  DON'T JUST PASS US BY ! ! !

 

 

 

      JUST REMEMBER:  There are 884 toxic chemicals known to be found in over-the-counter personal care products.  As people become aware of the widespread use of these toxins, they will start looking for products that contain natural, healthy, and harmless ingredients.

       Would you use a product on a daily basis is you KNEW it would cause cancer in you or your children’s vulnerable bodies?

      Ignorance is bliss only up to a point, and then the game of life is over.  Why not make yours happier, healthier, and longer?

      Neways is the solution to this extremely important problem.  Get started using our naturally and environmentally safe product line today, and you will feel cleaner, healthier and happier knowing how much you have improved the lives of yourself and your whole entire family of loved ones!

 

NOTE TO CLIENT:  THE REST REQUIRES ARRANGING WHERE THE ORDER FORM WILL BE (ACCESSIBLE FROM YOUR WEBSITE & ATTACHED TO YOUR E-MAIL) AND THERE WILL BE A HYPERLINK TO THE WEBSITE ORDER FORM FROM THIS LETTER.  CUSTOMERS WILL BE ABLE TO DIRECTLY PLACE ORDERS BY CLICKING THE HYPERLINK AT THE END OF YOUR LETTER, AND THEY WILL BE ABLE TO ACCESS YOUR WEBSITE AND LEARN HOW TO BECOME NEWAYS DISTRIBUTORS AS WELL ! ! !

 

HOW TO CONTACT ME:

 

All you need is to click on a hyperlink connecting to my website, located RIGHT DOWN BELOW!  There you will find complete contact information and an order form for the Neways product line!  You can begin ordering products and also begin to become a Neways Distributor right away!

 Just click on this hyperlink, and go to my own  personal Neways products ordering website:

 

   THE EMPOWER ALLIANCE ! ! !

 

 

 

 

NOTE TO MY CLIENT:  I WILL ADD ALL INFO ABOUT THE ALLIANCE AND ALSO REGARDING THE CUSTOMER BECOMING A NEWAYS DISTRIBUTOR LATER, AFTER YOU READ THIS LETTER AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT.  I NEED INFO ON BECOMING A NEWAYS DISTRIBUTOR ! ! !  YOU PROBABLY HAVE THAT AT YOUR WEBSITE.  JUST GIVE ME THE COMPLETE WEB ADDRESS.  I NEED EVERY LETTER AND SYMBOL IN PLACE TO ACCESS YOUR ORDER FORM PAGE.  ALSO, I HAVE LISTENED TO ONE OF THE TAPES YOU SENT ME, AND WILL LISTEN TO THE OTHER ONE ON MONDAY.

 

 

 

Your Sincere

Sales Letter Writer

 

Karen Peralta

 

RAINBOW WRITING, INC.

 

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